Feedback from Draft 1
Today we received feedback from our teachers regarding the first draft of our film.
The feedback was:
What went well - use of costume, exciting atmosphere because of short and fast shots.
It would be even better if - audio was fixed, the relationship between the characters was obvious (seems as though Tez is going to kill Alicia)
In response to our feedback we plan to:
Finish putting our titles in the film opening
Re-shoot some footage so that the quality is better and clearer
Find a way to naturally fade out the music that plays constantly
Re-place the 'Commute' title
Experiment with the audio (cancel out the noise of the wind)
Add some clue into the opening as to the future relationship between the characters
The feedback was:
What went well - use of costume, exciting atmosphere because of short and fast shots.
It would be even better if - audio was fixed, the relationship between the characters was obvious (seems as though Tez is going to kill Alicia)
In response to our feedback we plan to:
Finish putting our titles in the film opening
Re-shoot some footage so that the quality is better and clearer
Find a way to naturally fade out the music that plays constantly
Re-place the 'Commute' title
Experiment with the audio (cancel out the noise of the wind)
Add some clue into the opening as to the future relationship between the characters