Representation

Our film opening represents the difference of two parallel lives. There is a lot of controversial topics in the modern era on how we should all live a certain way and the outsiders get neglected form society. As a group we wanted to be the opposite; the idea that two people of two different personalities and backgrounds can still be together. 
It can be suggested that Alicia is a perfect example of how society thinks women should behave and act, we displayed this with the politeness features, the presence she brings and also the stereotypical London working businesswoman. She is well groomed, smart and looks entirely innocent.
Whereas, Tez for example is the complete opposite and is represented as a thuggish young man who has very little money (the reason for pushing a woman out the way to get on to a train). Although, you may think this is exactly how society portrays people, well right at the end of the film opening we see these two parallel life characters come together. With the use of non-diegetic music it connotes they are going to have some sort of romance and defy societies stereotypes.

Marketing for film opening

Movies are usually always marketed to convince people to watch the film. This means that our film opening needs to be promoted and advertised in several ways so the recognition of it increases. 

We will use social media to market our film as it is believed that 71% of teenagers use more than one social network site. This includes Facebook, Twitter and Instagram which are among the most popular social media sites. Instead of just using YouTube to show our film trailer we can actually use social media to promote which means we can hit our Primary Audience of 16-20 year olds. 



IMDB is a huge digital marketing sight and has millions of people visiting the sight to find new movies to watch. We will include as much information about our film as possible as we want people to relate to our film ideas and want viewers to give reviews on our film. This can also mean the 'word of mouth' effect is happening as people may suggest our film to other people if the enjoy.


Institution for Commute

The production company we chose was film 4, the reason we chose them is because they are a well-known company and many people would recognize it. The reason the choice of Production Company is important is because it determines what kind of audience the film will branch out too. Film 4 is mainly a UK based company which means that our film would be mainly a UK attraction and it has been created by a UK company.  It would be hard for it to reach an international audience that is really big, such as America for example. 
However, if the film did do well in the UK and it became a big hit, it could then spread worldwide and become an international hit. For the best means of distributing your product, I think to earn the most money we would need to put it in cinema, but as its only a small film it would probably been shown on TV, on the film 4 channel and from then it will try to produce as much money through that.  However, by putting the film on a film 4 channel, this is advertisement in itself, therefore other production companies may see the film and then lead on to put it in the big screen cinemas, which most of our profit will come from.

Production Diary

Day One - 09/11/2015
Today we found out who was in our group for our AS Media film opening. Our group consists of Alicia, Chloe, Tez and Evan. We assigned the roles within our group and they are as follows:

Alicia - Team Leader/Actor
Chloe - Director/Camera Woman
Tez - Actor
Evan - Director/Camera Man

Today, we also created individual film pitches that we would pitch to the rest of our team the next day.  This individual film pitch was created in order to pitch our own ideas to the rest of our group.  These ideas would be the group individuals own choice/preferred choice of what they would like to do for the film opening.

Day Two - 10/11/2015
(Tez and Chloe were absent on this day)

Today we pitched our individual ideas to the rest of our team. Evan and Alicia looked at Tez and Chloe's pitches and created an idea that incorporated elements from each of the individual pitches.

The idea is:
There are two opposing lives (a 20-something business woman and a homeless, 20-something man) that come together on a train and develop a romantic relationship over a period of time.

Day Three - 12/11/2015
Evan and Alicia pitched their collaborative idea to Tez and Chloe. The response was positive and more ideas were included. We spent the rest of the lesson creating an Emaze presentation to show to the class and receive feedback from.

Day Four - 13/11/2015
Today we pitched our film opening idea to the rest of our peers and teachers. We received feedback on the title of our film, the story line, location and things to improve on.

Day Five - 16/11/2015
Today we received the feedback sheets from our peers and teachers and took all of the comments into consideration and developed our film opening idea. We improved our characters and story line by changing the characters to the following:

The woman = a 20-something business woman and mother
The man = a homeless, teenage boy

By changing the ages of the characters, we have created a more enticing and unique film opening idea. We have decided to take influences from the films The 7:39 and The Boy Next Door.

We also allocated roles within the group and decided who would do what in the production of our film opening.

Day Six - 17/11/2015
Today, we began our individual roles within the group.

Evan started to look at Representation.
Tez looked at the camera shots that we should include in our film opening and the effects that they will create.
Chloe and Alicia updated the production diary and took Recce images to create a mood-board of our film opening in the near future.

Day Seven - 18/11/2015
(Alicia was absent on this day)

The rest of the group started adapting the idea to make it easier to film or more exciting. The group decided to adapt the character of the homeless boy and make him a teenage "thug" with a twist - he's actually a nice guy, not the stereotypical gangster. By making this alteration, we have allowed ourselves more room to be creative with our music choices and shots.

Day Eight - 19/11/2015
(Alicia and Tez was absent on this day)

The rest of the group videoed a draft version of the new film opening in order to be able to see the product and analyse the physical video. By doing this, it made the ideas come to life and allowed the group to get a visual product to base the real opening on.  They did this by getting Evan, Alicia, Beth, Will and Dan all from outside of media (except Evan) to be part of the draft film opening.  Chloe filmed this and then herself and Evan edited it using premiere and putting the instrumental of Nasty by Skepta in the background to add effect to the draft film opening.

Day Nine - 20/11/2015
(Chloe and Tez were absent on this day)

Alicia and Evan created a storyboard for the film opening. This included an image of the shot and a brief description about it. They also researched upon film production companies that could be used for our film. In addition, Alicia and Evan decided upon the production company of Film 4 and chose a production opening and merged the visuals together with a soundtrack that fits the setting of the teenage "thug". The music track is: Skepta - Nasty (musical instrumental).

Day Ten - 23/11/2015
Evan and Tez wrote up the risk assessment onto the risk assessment sheet whilst Alicia completed the production diary. The production diary states that the group's filming starts on Wednesday 25th November and continues over to Thursday 26th November.

Day Eleven - 24/11/2015
Alicia uploaded images of the risk assessment and shooting schedule onto her blog. She also finished her research into film fonts and titles and uploaded that to her blog. Chloe, Evan and Tez filmed the storyboard, put it onto Adobe Premier Pro and started to recording the voiceover of it.

Day Twelve - 25/11/2015
Today we filmed our production. Using our storyboard to help us with the shots we were meant to film and the length of each shot, we completed the filming process. We asked some of our fellow peers to be extra's in the film to make it look more realistic. We used three of the school cameras to film, meaning that we set all three up to film simultaneously and therefore we received the same shots from multiple angles. This means that when it comes to editing, we have a range of interesting shots to use.

Day Thirteen - 26/11/2015
Today, Evan was taking photos of our group working and Chloe and Alicia were editing the film opening.  Tez was looking at what song choices we had to use certain parts of the film for Alicia's spotlight scenes, as we already have the song Nasty by Skepta for Tez's opening shot.                                                                                                                        
 Day Fourteen - 27/11/2015 (Chloe and Tez were absent on this day) Alicia and Evan finished the rough copy of our film opening and spoke about the plan for our next filming date and how we can ensure that it will go smoothly. They also found a different camera that we could film with.

Day Fifteen - 02/12/2015 Today the group re-filmed the entirety of the film opening. This time, the filming process was more fluent as we already had experience in the shots we wanted and the angles we knew would look good. In particular, we added a tracking shot of Tez's character walking down the train aisle; this shot was effective because the focus was on Tez and the lighting on the train made the shot look professional.

Day Sixteen - 03/12/2015 Today we uploaded the new footage and started the editing process. We also decided to cut the original Film 4 indent that we wanted to include as it was too long and didn't particularly fit with the theme. Instead, we opted for the simple approach of text. This says "A FILM 4 PRODUCTION". We were all impressed with our new footage.

Day Seventeen - 04/12/2015 Today we continued editing our film opening and added small amounts of titles, such as the actors names. However, we quickly realised that our footage lasted less time than the required time (2 minutes) and knew that we had to film a couple more shots in order to fit the expected duration. We finished the editing the footage that we had in time to submit it as our first draft. This draft is to be watched by all of the media classes and their teachers to be given feedback on.

Day Eighteen and Nineteen - 07/12/2015 and 08/12/2015 Today we watched each others first drafts and gave verbal feedback on them. The feedback regarding our film opening - Commute - was as follows: 1. If dialogue was included then the opening would seem more realistic. 2. Tez's thuggish character gives the impression that he is stalking Alicia's character. 3. There is no indication that the characters are supposed to become romantically involved.


Teacher feedback said:
The variety of shots are good. Faces are unclear and therefore do not accurately reflect characters. Editing is mostly fluent, some missing shots. Use of natural lighting is good. Alicia should keep a neutral face - looks too jolly. Music becomes boring as it is used constantly.


Day Twenty - 10/12/2015 Today we filmed a couple more scenes to add into our footage in order to increase the duration of it. These scenes included - Alicia's character walking down the high street (dialogue was included in order to establish her character) and Tez's character walking down the street with headphones in, then taking them out (this scene will be effective in the essence that we can fade out the music - this is a reaction to our teacher feedback).

Day Twenty-One - 14/12/2015
The group uploaded their additional shots that were filmed on the 10th December and integrated them into the other footage. The titles were added to the film opening. Alicia completed the Commute film poster using an image of a train and train platform whilst Chloe started to make a website for the film. 

Risk Assessment

Below is a picture of the risk assessment Evan himself has completed.  In this image it displays what risks could happen on a severity scale of 1-10.  Alongside each risk there is a control measure for each one of how to prevent these risks from happening.  At the bottom of the sheet is the emergency number we need to call if anything does happen, as well as the local 24 hour hospital, in our case is Broomfield Hospital.

Shooting Schedule

Below is a picture of our shooting schedule as a group that Alicia created herself. In this image it shows the day and date that we will be filming, what number scene it is, if it is interior or exterior, the shot number and the description of what is happening in the shot, the location of the shot, the characters involved in each shot and the props/special equipment needed in each shot.

Music Research

We chose Skepta's Instrumental of Nasty because it is current music that is on the up; it is listened to stereotypically by the people on the Streets of London and City based areas. A lot of people that listened to it wear the same type of clothing style as the actor in our film opening so we felt as a group this could fit really well with the actors attitude.


The next music is an Emotive Motivational track off YouTube that as a group we felt fits our Genre: Romance. The music creates a happy connotations which allows the watcher to connect with the scenes and the romance between the two characters which is yet to be discovered throughout the rest of the film.

Props Research

Props Research

For Alicia:
  • Long draped coat
  • Court heels
  • Holdall bag
  • Train ticket
  • Coffee cup
  • Newspaper
For Tez:
  • Rucksack
  • Black, hooded puffa jacket
  • Earphones
  • Black joggers
  • Black trainers
For Chloe:
  • Looking like a typical, innocent woman
  • Train ticket
For the train platform setting:
  • Train
  • Underpass/alleyway
  • Cafe